1). An impulsive change of mind.
2). An inclination to make such changes.
3). Music. A capriccio from Italian capriccio--"head with hair standing on end" - hence horror...
Hello, my pretties. Yes, the daffodils are making brave attempts at showing us their bright, sunny faces, but we are still trying to push away winter temperatures and that pesky "s" word from the daily forecast. For now, it's acting more like March, but I'll take it.
I've been hard at work on the fourth book in the Sabrina Strong series, Vampire Caprice. As the definition above indicates it will be anything but dull.
I've come up with a synopsis, here. It might be a tad long, but would like some comments on it. And all comments are welcomed, just make sure you understand spamming me will not get you published.
cover by Lucy Pireel |
The
big vampire, Bjorn Tremayne, is up to his old tricks again. He has
lost his reign and has now become a rogue, and this doesn't sit well
with him, but he's going to do something that will change this
situation. Dark World has set a bounty on Sabrina's head because she
wouldn't mate with him, but he has come up with a way to trick her
into bed with him. The only thing is he needs to get her away from
the only vampire who protects her—Vasyl.
Sabrina's
agenda was to enjoy a pleasant Thanksgiving with family, and no
vampires, Nephilim, werewolves, or demons to interrupt it.
Unfortunately a demon in the guise of her Grandmother Rose has
decided to attack her at this family gathering. Bill Gannon, her
neighbor and Nephilim, has gotten an invite to Thanksgiving, but just
when he's about to save Sabrina from the demon, who walks in, kills
the demon and whisks Sabrina off in his cool Super Snake Mustang but
Tremayne... with the help of leprechaun Rick.
After
the melee in Sabrina's brother's house, Tremayne convinces Sabrina
she isn't safe from demons who are after her for the bounty on her
head—dead or alive—and manages to talk her into running.
Vasyl,
meanwhile, has fought off Tremayne's minions, but has lost Sabrina,
and now it's daybreak. He has to chase Sabrina across the Midwest,
knowing that Tremayne's ultimate goal is to mate with her—before
he, himself, has had a chance to consummate his marriage to Sabrina.
In
order to complete his duty of finding the sibyl, Bill Gannon must
chase after Sabrina, and find some way to talk her into having his
children in order to save the whole Nephilim race.
While
all of these men are vying for Sabrina's attentions, something called
an Undead, who feeds on souls, seeks Sabrina—the last sibyl—for
his own diabolical needs. And he is very determined to find her.
3 comments:
Save that last paragraph as it is terrific, but shorten then rest. A Thanksgiving celebration without the demons of the underworld (or something similar)is penetrated by etc.
I wish you much success!
I never did like writing a synopsis.
There's room here and there for trimming extraneous words.
@Mari--thanks! I'll work on it!
@ William, I'm the same way. I hate writing them. Used to give it to my publisher's editor, and she'd come up with something from my ramblings. Now, I have to do this.
My work is only begun...
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